Character Details: How to Choose

Whether you know everything about your characters before you start writing or nothing about them, you can't include every single detail in your manuscript. (Well, you can, but you probably shouldn't.) As Nancy Kress says, you'll want to "choose artfully." You'll want to home in on the particular details your readers are looking for.  Which details … Continue reading Character Details: How to Choose

Character Introductions: How the Masters Do It

In the last post, we listed seven techniques to use when introducing characters.  Most of the masters use a combination of techniques. Here's how. Method 1: Out-of-Viewpoint DescriptionIn this method, the narrator (not a view-point character) tells us about the characters. JKR uses this method to introduce the Dursleys at the beginning of the first … Continue reading Character Introductions: How the Masters Do It

Character Introductions: Characterizing from the get-go

A character's first appearance in a story is a big opportunity to characterize.  Here are several ways to fulfill its potential. Bring characters on in character If you take home nothing else from this post, at least take this: bring characters on in character. "To introduce any given character effectively, you must first of all … Continue reading Character Introductions: Characterizing from the get-go

Introducing the WritesWithTools.com Newsletter and a FREE, 19-page Character Development Workbook

Hello, People! We started a newsletter. It's a monthly-to-quarterly-ish newsletter, a way to check in with you, give you updates, and send you free worksheets and whatnot. If you're already a Tool updates subscriber through the Feedburner link (over there on the right) or by email through WordPress, then we've already added you to the … Continue reading Introducing the WritesWithTools.com Newsletter and a FREE, 19-page Character Development Workbook

Character Tags: How the Masters Use Them

We're looking at character tags.  Here's how some of the master story tellers help us remember who their characters are. Jim Butcher's Dresden seriesHarry Dresden is a practicing wizard who hires out as a detective.  Jim Butcher has said that he consciously creates tags and traits for his characters to help readers identify them. In Butcher's … Continue reading Character Tags: How the Masters Use Them